Despite having had punishment, a vast majority of ex-convicts are likely to recommit crime. There are several underlying causes associated with this problem which will be discussed, along with some practical measurement to address this issue.
It is assumed that main factor leading to being engaged in criminal are poverty, unemployment and lack of sufficient education. Due to having criminal record, it is not acceptable for employer to hire a person imprisoning before. As a consequence, ex-convicts find it difficult to make a living and inevitably get involve again in unlawful activities to meet their basic needs. Moreover, current prison system can make the situation worse. Keeping with various types of lawbreakers, offenders are more likely to be influenced by others having violent behavior. For example, prisoners carrying out the petty crime like pick pocketing are being hold near those getting involved in the serious crime such as smuggling. As a result, their criminal intention is going to be strengthened even after releasing.
The main responsibility of solving this problem should be shouldered by the government. First of all, it is necessary to provide rehabilitation programs including vocational training and education. Having lucrative skills such as plumbing and welding just to name, they will be deterred to perpetrate crime again. In addition, developing a deeper understanding of correct moral behavior in prisoners can be considered to be a deterrent of recommitting in the future. As well as, supporting them when they are looking for accommodation and work is another measurement. This will give them a sense of satisfaction to correct their way of life and change to a law-abiding citizen when they release into society.
To sum up, although there are various contributing factors to motivate ex-criminals to recommit crime, this problem can be tackled provided that the government takes it into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 607, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ve them a sense of satisfaction to move in a correct way and change to a law-abiding citizen whe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in fact, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51369863014 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06586237519 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5850401185 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232828518872 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715085630347 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407916868337 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13984720021 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129848814455 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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