Nowadays, the tourist extension has been widely witnessed in some developing nations throughout the world. This is because of the desire of these countries to boost their economic situation and gain international investment from other developed nations. This essay will first make a discussion about the plausible reason above, and how this greatly benefits a nation’s employment rate.
First of all, there is no room for doubt that tourist expansion has played a crucial role in the total increase in the economic sales of a country. Therefore, tourism is considered as a primary driver to boost the economy. Furthermore, this strategy also provides a nation with a great opportunity to be invested from international sources. Taking Vietnam as a prime example, by extending in tourist fields, many large co-operations worldwide have supplied Vietnam with international funds, and they have also constructed their factories here such as Samsung, Apple, or Facebook and so on.
In long-term circumstances, this also exerts practical impacts on the improvement of a developing nation by increasing the unemployment rate, especially in rural regions. Due to the fact that many factories have been built thanks to the abroad investment, a group of jobless labor has a chance to join the workforce, helps them not only to support their families but also to greatly reduce the unemployment rate. Ho Chi Minh city, for instance, the huge improvement of tourism benefits a lot to the city by providing Vietnamese laboring workforce for multi-national companies, and thus help them to find a well-paid job.
In conclusion, due to the hope of increasing economic sales, many developing countries have come up with the idea of investing in national tourism, and this hugely profits on these countries with a significant decrease in the unemployment proportion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36177474403 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06310903423 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59385665529 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3107945438 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.818181818 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207126512238 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791640296038 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632702730766 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138667699551 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616787367669 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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