Printed newspaper has played an important role of knowledge provider since many decades ago. However, it is argued that this kind of newspaper should be abandoned. This essay solely agrees with the above idea. This essay will first make discussion about the environmental issues relating to the production of traditional newspaper, and then talk about how inconvenient it is compared to another type of information provider namely Internet.
It is suggested that the production of this type of newspaper has provoked debates throughout a decade due to its related-environmental effects. The production of traditional newspaper requires woods by cutting down trees in forest which caused deforestation and floods in many places in the world. Furthermore, it takes a great deal of money to maintain manufacturing and requires high level of energy to run the production chains leading to pollutant emissions such as carbon dioxide gas, nitrous gas, nitrogen dioxide gas, and so on. This is the reason why many nations have to shut down its production chains to protect the ecosystem. Japan is a prime example where its government had permanently forbidden traditional newspaper which results in the reduction of 40% cutting trees and 34% the amount of detrimental gases since 2017.
On the one hand, many assumptions have made comparison of how convenient it is between printed newspaper and online newspaper recently. In the technology era, most of information is encoded into data and is transferred to the Internet which leading to a new solution to store information and knowledge compared to traditional method like printed newspaper. With regards to convenience, people show their interests in reading online newspaper because it brings limitless in-depths knowledge to human world by a click of mouse and a great deal of information is always updated instantly. A survey carried out by Vietnamese government illustrated that over 87% of teenagers using online newspaper to update their knowledge daily instead of printed method.
In conclusion, the awareness of environmental problems should be a primary factor to consider traditional newspaper as a harmful issue which should be forbidden. Moreover, in terms of convenience, online newspaper is favored by the world over the printed one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42061281337 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09493190846 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537604456825 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8681514292 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.733333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135163777517 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550242772978 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371306939898 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854756134631 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308352764562 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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