Nowadays countries try to invest in the tourist industry and develop their tourist facilities dramatically. In this essay, we examine the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of development and try to refer to some of the reasons for such a competition.
Countries need to have a stable source of income to be able to afford their expenditures same as paying the salary of the governments' employees or developing public facilities and so on. It is a long time that many governments realized that the tourist industry has huge capabilities.
First of all, it does not need high-tech technologies to develop. Second, the number of jobs that this industry can produce is far more than other industries. The reason is in this industry at the end you must provide services for humans, therefore, they prefer to communicate with humans. In other words, we cannot replace people with robots in the tourist industry and it means more job positions for people.
Third, this industry can provide services for a varied range of tastes. It means the number of people who absorb tourist attractions can be considerably high. Therefore, countries look at the tourist industry as a stable source of income that can provide many job positions and increase the average income of society.
However, every development has its disadvantages as well. By increasing the number of tourists we need more space to build new facilities like hotels or entertainment sites. Sometimes it has been seen that international companies with an enormous amount of capital tried to purchase whole old buildings of a district and vanished those buildings thoroughly to build a new luxurious hotel.
Such a huge change in a city can force local people to move to some countrysides. Local people may get angry because of these kinds of changes and make them radical or anti-tourists.
It seems governments must provide a balance between the amount of money and supports that they provide for investing in the tourist industry and the negative consequences that such kind of development can have on local people or historical areas of the cities.
Also, we must not neglect the effects of such a development on the environment and the historical sites. If the number of tourists increased more than the capacity of an area, it would cause some unrecoverable damages to the environment.
To sum up, the developing tourist industry has its pros and cons like any other industry. People and government both must make a balance between them to not only enjoy the profits of such a development but also avoid its harmful effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent but also avoid its harmful effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, kind of, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02320185615 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89407606538 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473317865429 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3715608464 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.095238095 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306631918692 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991112222831 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777236906556 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14248727086 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886309894101 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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