Many developing countries require aid from Intercontinental organisation to develop.Many people think that this aid should be financial while others think that particular and advices are more useful.
Nowadays, the support from wealth nations has been become more and more popular. Although there are billions dollars are spent for this, many argument against that should be non financial.
There are several reasons to believe that financial help is really important with some countries. First and foremost, poor nations need the support from rich ones to develop their economy like improve their education system, build hospital,traffic system,.... In Vietnam, we have a program called "Doi moi"( renovation), the program was started in 1989, the government opened trade relations with all countries in the world and encourage foreign and domestic private investment. Since Doi moi, our country has undergone substantial changes : productivity and agricultural exports have constantly increased, the living standard grows higher and higher. Secondly, the succor can help poor nations catch up with modern and advanced technology and withdraw the distance with wealth countries while if they single handed , they will stay far behind with international forms as a consequence.
However, there are still have a wide range of strong argument point that experiences and advises are able to be more useful. For example, it seem that education is a key factor in the growth of a country so advice on how to build such as system should be given. Additionally foreign assistance can also be given in term of providing human resources. By having an additional number os well - educated and knowledgeable work in their country, hopefully less developed countries can escape from the poverty.
In conclusion, besides many people agree that the help from international organisation ought to be non financial, it seem to me that if without commercial support, developing countries absolutely can not get out of the poverty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41901408451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88064187036 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665492957746 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0054373521 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.25 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21055698458 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723470919719 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521597102099 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14195309904 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496380223577 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.