Many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough exercise, what do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?
Exercises are are crucial for human's development either it's physical or mental. Hence, doctors have been worried that people are not involving in physical exercises. what would be the causes of this phenomenon? I will explain them and State some solutions in this essay.
Laying on bed for longer hours, most of the people nowadays living this kind of sedentary lifestyle. they are just addicted to their mobile and therefore, they do not bother about their fitness. Number of causes would be possible if a person can not participate in the physical activities. The fundamental one is obesity. It is a condition in which fat is accumulated around the stomach tissues. This is occured due to not involving in compound body moments such as running. This became a major problem due to the fact that pupils are just stick with their bed or office chairs. Another sub health issues may be held due this condition. For instance this fat would start depositing in the arteries and veins which would affect the blood circulation of the body and create some health problems. Another cause which would arise from not doing exercises is laziness. In other words, body feels lazy or sedentary when no frequent moments have been done by the body parts.
Despite these problems, there are some solutions which would help to overcome them. First and foremost is promoting the value and benefits of gym. Which is really a good activity to counter the obesity as well as laziness. Because a person could burn fat and calories while exercising and lifting heavy weights. As a result, food would digest properly instead of depositing in their tissues. Second and best method is Yoga. It is the most convenient and pocket friendly method as it doesn't require any equipment. However it's result are worthwhile enough. Because, yoga vanishes all the laziness of body as it needs attention and focus. In addition, it provide relaxation to the mind and momentum to the body for doing any activity in an efficient way.
To summarise, people should beware from the hazards of not doing physical activities. They should spend some of their time in it in order to get rid from obesity and laziness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48737383422 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550135501355 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9566484634 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.8148148148 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92592592593 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219576124099 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518627107173 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597228157819 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129272940761 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588573293222 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.