Many elderly are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, the external-assisted way including either care or nursing homes is the main consideration for family towards looking after their old relatives. There are several merits and demerits for this interesting issue which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, being old people in a family sent to the care homes would bring benefit for them including the granted health. In terms of the treatment, elderly would be nursed carefully, not only for the food which they consume (related to their health condition) but also for the mental health that they will gain (there are many friends who they can interact). Furthermore, if their family do only in their home to take care elderly, they will be unable to fulfill all of both the old and their own nuclear family necessity. With the provision of such facilities, it would be better for them to donate for the nursing home to enjoy rest of elderly life.
On the flip side, this issue could bring drawback related to the old’s mental health which probably generates a sorrowness. in the rest of time, elderly need to be cared by their own family, subsequently, the more family do not look after their old relatives, the more depression they would suffer. In addition, because people who look after our family are not our relatives, the treatment certainly different with ours. There are many cases where the old people are treated inappropriate by such organization as they orientation just for earning much money from the donation of old’s relatives.
To sum up, putting elderly in the care homes or nursing homes instead of caring by relative itself bring several advantages including the good treatment regarding to elderly health and ability for fulfilling all necessity by their relatives. Besides, the worse mental health condition and improperly treatment by such organization might its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... which probably generates a sorrowness. in the rest of time, elderly need to be ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10322580645 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72847550181 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503225806452 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7928090572 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307221806935 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123714935713 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107909868529 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208154021459 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402626374882 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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