Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing himes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
It is widely spread thought that nowdays elders should be kept at care homes or nursing homes in stead of spending the rest of their life with their relatives. On one hand it certainly strengthens the possibility for the new families to have more privacy amd pshycological independance, however, there will also be some drawbacks effecting the healthy relationship between generations.
One evident benefit is that the home starts to have more space for its residents so for the current family there will be more place for growth and self expression. Another factor is having more peaceful aura as separation of the two generations will eliminate any possibile conflict regarding difference in mentality, lifestyle or habbits, some of which are still getting updated day by day.For example, the vast majority of elders avoid complicated technologies by considering the annoying which the younger generation is addictively using them every day. This is one of the common issue for an argument between our generations.
On the other hand there are obvious drawbacks when it comes to keeping a healthy relationship between relatives. In the history of human nature we have never experienced such an enormous generational gap which takes elders away from their own offspring. As a matter of a fact human nature always kept its survival due to the idea and values of staying united. The family as beimg one of the major forms of their union is getter weeker and less actual in this day and age. Actually, we are the first generation to experiance this separation so noone can predict the real long-term consequences of it.
In conclusion, there are well seen plus points in putting elderly people into care centers but obviously there is a huge price to pay for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03071672355 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78464831022 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610921501706 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.774412144 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146802557675 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574873444037 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580576369875 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100434381632 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040192076452 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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