Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People are becoming increasingly health conscious these days. while some prefer gyms for keeping their body in shape, others think that there are other far better ways to do so. I believe that although gymnasiums offer a plethora of facilities, for an average person, other forms of exercise are more advantageous.
Joining gymnasiums can help a person take care of their body in a more professional manner. The most conspicuous benefit of going to a gym is that these places often employ certified health trainers in order to assist their clients. The gym-goers can seek advice of these experts regarding the diet they should follow, the muscles they should focus on, and how much exercise is appropriate for them. they can even get a personalised fitness plan and diet regimen which best fits their body type and abilities. along with this, gyms provide a wide range of equipment and machines, each of which could be used to build up a specific set of muscles. For example, the dumbbells can be used to train the biceps, while the treadmill can boost a person's stamina.
However, some other methods are better suited to a normal person. Indeed, to be a member of the gym, one has to pay a substantial amount of membership fee, something that can cause an imbalance in an average earner's budget. In these cases, participating in a sports can be the solution. taking part in games such as football, hockey cricket or badminton can help a person maintain their fitness level, since all these activities require a considerable amount of running, jumping and other forms of physical exertions. Moreover, playing not only improves the physical health of a person, but also keeps their mental health at check. this is because along with bestowing physical benefits, sports also provide pleasure to the player. Another benefit of playing a game is that unlike gym memberships, the commitment to these games goes on for a long time, even during later phases of the life. Thus, the health benefits that these provide are long term.
To conclude, gyms are for sure a good method to stay strong, but the results obtained by exercising there are often transient. sports, however, bring transformations that stay for longer, which is why I think they are far better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, while, as to, for example, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93193717277 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60678309623 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9226302277 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1578947368 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137816765824 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431744252512 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429858262677 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982075064143 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031717402375 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.