Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit these places?
museums attract a large number of people from foreign countries; however, the people living in the vicinity of those museums often show little interest in visiting them. This essay will discuss why this issue arises while proposing some measures to ignite the interest of the locals in museums.
The people living near the museums do not usually pay it a visit as they are already familiar with the museum and the exhibits shown in it. The museums generally portray the historical and cultural background of the locality through the exhibitions. The locals think that they are already aware about the culture and history and thus, they do not need to visit a museum to know more about it. While tourists see museums as sites of interest, locals, having been living in the area for a long time see nothing special in it.
Nevertheless, there are several ways in which the people living in the neighbourhood can be encouraged to visit the museums. First of all, the local people should be exempt from any charges for entering the museum. This is because, the tourist come with the intention of visiting special places, so they do not hesitate to spend money on tickets whereas the local people are reluctant to pay for seeing things which they probably already know about. Hence, if the tickets are free of cost, the locals might pay a visit to the museum in their free time. Secondly, the museums must regularly hold exhibitions in which exotic pieces of art or history, or the works of international artist are shown. This will fascinate the locals, persuading them to go to the museum.
In conclusion, as the familiarity of the locals with the objects or exhibits shown in the museums is the main reason behind their reluctance towards visiting them, it can be tackled by giving them free access to the museums and showing exhibitions from different cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88087774295 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45853977037 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510971786834 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8428570419 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.769230769 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350008691595 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130919882758 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443364402344 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222036871419 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032628790262 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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