Although it is sometimes thought by some that considerable amount of revenue expenditure on arts by the government of various countries, is entirely fair to support artwork, other people think that an authority ought to spend a significant proportion of finance on healthcare and education system. In my opinion, I believe that an authority of a country should primarily focus on an improvement of healthcare and education sectors by spending major amount of money on these departments.
On the one hand, some people consider that huge spending on art sector by the government is important to support fine artists of the country. In other words, in the field of art, sometimes, great artists don't able to earn enough to thrive well so if an administration expense good amount in this field then it could support fine art workers and encourage them to create extraordinary fabulous work. Furthermore, it is essential to protect and maintain historical paintings and sculptures to keep heritage alive. For example, in many countries, there are enormous collections of primitive artwork that's including amazing cave art, spectacular paintings and incredible sculptures, namely, Ajanta and Ellora caves situated in the state of India, Maharashtra, are finest surviving examples of an ancient indian art, that need regular maintenance and preservation by ministry of culture of an indian government. Moreover, historical and modern art works of a country attract foreigners to visit that eventually increase tourism tremendously. For instance, the world famous painting of Mona Lisa by Leonardo Da Vinci is owned by the government of France and is on the wall of Louvre in Paris and is the major attraction to visit museum.
On the other hand, other people think that the government should pay major attention towards other vital sectors such as, health and education system and I agree. The major reason behind this is that in many countries, healthcare facilities are not readily available at all over the places especially, in remote areas. To illustrate, in rular areas of several developing countries, there are lack of healthcare establishments, therefore, people have to travel extremely far to get proper treatment of their illnesses and most of the time its too late to reach and get medical attention. Another critical point to consider is that, in various poor countries, some children don't get basic education either due to poor financial background or unavailability of institutions. As an example, in some underdeveloped countries, there are immense paucity of schools, colleges, universities that ultimately, left some children uneducated and this, consequently, force them to work in their childhood in extremely arduous work situations like in factories etc. In addition to this, government should also concentrate to improve existing medical and educational services and should provide enough funding to various remarkable scientific research projects to enhance overall physical and mental well being of Nation.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I think that government ought to majorly invest in building new hospitals, schools and expanding medical and educational services especially, in village areas to fulfil these basic primary requirements of the people. Therefore, government authorities should planning ahead to allocate major proportion of budget to improve and expand medical and educational services.
- In cities and towns in all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem What are the causes of the this and What action can be taken to solve this problem 67
- Economic progress is often used to measure a country s success However some people believe that other factors are more important What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country s success Do you think one factor is more important 73
- In many government like to spend more money on the arts Some people agree with this However some think government should spend more on health and education Discuss both side and give your opinion 75
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that these activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... field of art, sometimes, great artists dont able to earn enough to thrive well so i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ormous collections of primitive artwork thats including amazing cave art, spectacular...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n various poor countries, some children dont get basic education either due to poor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2926.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 533.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48968105066 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03100780215 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 926.1 506.74238477 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1872367308 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.875 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9375 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262359220641 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834838311764 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060115731224 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161314439751 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352813944598 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... field of art, sometimes, great artists dont able to earn enough to thrive well so i...
^^^^
Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ormous collections of primitive artwork thats including amazing cave art, spectacular...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 673, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n various poor countries, some children dont get basic education either due to poor ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 89.0 41.998997996 212% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2926.0 1615.20841683 181% => OK
No of words: 533.0 315.596192385 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48968105066 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.20363070211 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03100780215 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 176.041082164 162% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 926.1 506.74238477 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1872367308 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.875 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9375 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262359220641 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834838311764 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060115731224 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161314439751 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352813944598 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.