A government’s duty is to lead the citizens to a rule of prosperity and growth. The growth, which can be measured in several different categories, is for some governments based upon the economy. A lot of governments in the world feel bringing more financial capital into their country should be of utmost importance.
The economic growth contributes to a lot of other sectors while creating employment, increasing the income and purchasing power of a common man, and industrial growth. Banks can provide more loans at lower interest rates. With a flourishing economy, one can also expect the government to reduce the tax burden on people. Be it foreign or domestic, an investment in the country makes it stronger financially.
The economic progress, however, is affected by several areas that are often overlooked by these governments. These areas require ample, if not equal, attention when it comes to progress. Sectors such as effective governance, infrastructure development, and health care also contribute to a nation’s step forward. A faction of population suffers everyday while visiting government offices to get all kinds of necessary paperwork done. There is a huge sentiment of discontent among the people regarding these offices. The governance is needed to make effective by streamlining the processes. In rural areas, where electricity and healthcare are scarce, the infrastructure is needed to be set up which will ultimately contribute to human resource development.
I believe, the economic and all other growths are cross-linked. For instance, an economically stable country, can use the financial power to develop its rural infrastructure. On the other hand, a nation’s hassle-free paperwork and transparent governance policies will attract foreign industries to set up their plants and offices in the country. Neglecting these goals can also negatively affect the economy. Hence, as much as one sector is important than another, but one cannot bring stability unless it works hand in hand towards peace and prosperity.
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. 67
- Water used for different purposes in six areas 73
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 78
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other believe that it is important f 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...h. The growth, which can be measured in several different categories, is for some governments bas...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...orward. A faction of population suffers everyday while visiting government offices to ge...
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Line 5, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ntribute to human resource development. I believe, the economic and all other gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49685534591 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21395955407 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1007362514 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180063918383 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486440958672 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041181698886 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096567899605 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307634061974 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.