The modern technological advancements have made life easier for the people. The technology, however, comes at a price. The price is sometimes paid as adverse environmental effects across the globe. A faction of population believes, the technology which puts the environment at great risk, shall also bring forth the solutions while another school of thought is to make changes in our lives.
The simple lifestyle will leave us without certain gadgets or luxuries and making their existence superfluous. They were invented and developed to make our lives easier and hence, should have continuous presence in our lives. Nowadays, these inventions have become necessities rather than luxury e.g. cars and mobile phones, and no matter how much pollution and greenhouse effect they cause, one cannot get rid of them. Hence, one should look for solutions to these problems rather than shutting them down.
Intellectuals are around the globe are using cutting edge technology to devise solutions to mitigate the risks of global warming and climate change. Roads are being made by plastics to recycle them and make them more durable. Another fine example is an electric car which can substitute the conventional ones to cut emission. Such initiatives help in reducing the carbon footprint while trying to undo the damage caused by years of exploitation of the planet. Even though policies are being formulated and technology being used to fight environmental issues, the pace is still slow.
Hence, in my opinion, one needs to find a compromise between the two approaches. Instead of getting rid of technology and live a simple life, one need to develop the environment friendly alternatives to the current necessities.
To conclude, I believe the wheel of technology is unstoppable and we should turn it towards the eco-friendly initiatives rather than trying to stopping it altogether.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... technology, however, comes at a price. The price is sometimes paid as adverse envi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, e.g., hence, however, if, look, so, still, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33444816054 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84817121733 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635451505017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7046543131 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170023206883 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498178282845 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372592403248 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885516876679 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215914661052 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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