Many Governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Over the past decades, economic of the country has become a vital condition especially in nowadays. In the discussion of this, numerous numbers of governments believe that the progress of their economic policy is the most essential goal. Some, on the contrary, argue that other progresses are at the same level of importance for the nation. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and argue on my opinion the other should be as important as the economic one.
As the common thought of many governors, the economic is their important goal to develop for the nation. It is because economic appearance reveals the ability to exist and compete in the world community. To be specific, the GDP, for example, has been used to identify whether the country is able to play a part of the trades. United States and China hold together the most significant power in trading progression of the world. According to this issue, some may think that it plays the necessary role in driving the whole country to the better development. Meanwhile, there are related conditions that may affect the economic progress.
However, the others still suggest that there are several issues which should be taken in account as it is as important as the economic progress, the environment and public health and facilities in particular. The environment is related to any other industrial and human process because of the effect of each to the world atmosphere and biosphere. A great number of researchers also mention public health in their paper since it shows the value of life in each country. With poor public facilities, it results in the shorter life-expectancy for the populace. Thanks to its essence in the development of nation, some believe that these types of progress and others should become equally importance as the economic progress. Furthermore, these issues have some relationship between each other, and relate to the national development.
In conclusion, then, as I suggested earlier, there are several types of progress that should be considered equally for their importance in the nation. The economic progress is evidently importance, together with environment and all the others that relate to the development of country. The economics may show the exist in world community, the rest depicts the quality of population livelihood and the performance of government to demonstrate the advancement of nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...has become a vital condition especially in nowadays. In the discussion of this, numerous nu...
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Line 13, column 310, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ment of country. The economics may show the exist in world community, the rest depicts th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21079691517 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83815105429 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483290488432 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0352990904 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.684210526 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42271111047 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123881873615 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915249676567 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260951898628 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448202129247 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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