Many governments think that economic progress is their most improtant goald. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argument that numberous governments believe that economic improvement is their crucial achievement. While I have to admit that this perspective is accurated to a somewhat extent. I still hold a notion that other kinds of progress should be noticed as that makes all effects of country grow up uniformly.
On the one hand, it can be clearly seen that economic is essential innovation in the development of each country. First of all, a strong state must have wealthy economic, which helps advance other progresses such as education, medical, security etc. In other words, the governments can have many investments in other activities of social life. For instance, the development of infrastructure can help improving living standard of citizens life. Second, myriad influences of globalization can impact on countries, specially national economic. countries want to intergation deeply and widely, so they might open their market and break their restriction. Thus, economic become one of vital elements helping country achieve their goals rapidly.
On the other hand, others who are in favour of developing other kinds of progress uniformly have their own justifications. As a matter of fact, other improvements such as education, custom, security etc make the world go around. Firstly, this ensures economic developing stability. education is a basic of each country helping advance economic as employees with high skills, experiences and professional positive of country in economic progress and other proceeding. Besides, developing economic neither pay attention on custom nor qualify private life of citizens. To specify, developing economic must go with remain proper custom, moreover government should take care of health and living standard of inhabitants.
To recapitulate, despite the great benefits of economic, I’m strong convinced that the equal development should be focused in order to achieve the best results.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...provement is their crucial achievement. While I have to admit that this perspective i...
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Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('somewhat') instead an adjective, or a noun ('extent') instead of another adjective.
...t that this perspective is accurated to a somewhat extent. I still hold a notion that other kinds...
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Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
... development of infrastructure can help improving living standard of citizens life. Secon...
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Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Countries
...countries, specially national economic. countries want to intergation deeply and widely, ...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
... ensures economic developing stability. education is a basic of each country helping adva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58983050847 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97744079563 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8871144789 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198969955222 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638842641299 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505587805871 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113116133889 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548564215918 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.