Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is an ongoing debate considering the most significant objective in a nation is to focus on the growth of economy. However, a majority of public hold the belief that various life aspects deserve to be paid more attention. This essay will delve into both sides of this issue, while simultaneously offering an impartial view from my personal perspective.
To begin with, there appear to be several reasons why a thriving economy is highly appreciated. It is apparent that a booming economic system enables higher tax revenues. Therefore, a larger amount of sum can be funded for constructions of new infrastructures as well as upgrading and developing new kind of transportations, etc.
Additionally, by advancing Gross Domestic Product rates, the living standard of citizens can be pretty much improved. In other words, people will have access to fundamental needs and services, for instance, shelter, food, clean water and healthcare are one of the most essential needs for better standard of living.
On the contrary, while economic progress can undoubtedly provide funding and opportunities to invest in various social aspects, there are several factors why we should also take other types of progress into account alongside with economy growth. Firstly, education and health frequently seen as a valuable support to one nation's economic. A good educational system can equip individuals with a wide-ranged of knowledge, skills, expertises that are essential for modern life as well as workforce. Furthermore, the presence of hospitals can be a source of great help in terms of productivity increasing. When people are in good health, they tend to have higher energy levels, resulting in improved work performance and efficiency.
Another noteworthy rationale in favor of this notion relates to environmental problems which is now a major concern globally, should not be overlooked. Admittedly, the climate and temperature is rising unceasingly as governments should be responsible to identify approaches to raise public's awareness as well as preserving nature. Thus, this is to ensure a consistent future of a country and in order to increase life qualities for older generations.
I would like to conlcude by saying that while it is valid to a number of extents that focusing on boosting economic progress will contribute to the increase in income rates, therefore the revenue can be invested in building and enhancing public's lives. I would side with the view that some goals such as environment preservations or education advancements should be considered as evenly vital.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2191.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38329238329 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08700823758 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601965601966 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1012307022 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.722222222 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120304274106 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317093290307 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033741752616 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574753331591 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234738835204 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 78.4519038076 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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