Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both this view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many governments consider the economic promotion as the main purpose of theirs while, some ordinary people say that as well as economic enhancement, other sorts of progression is also necessary, like many other people, I also believe we should be keen on multilateral enhancement.
Some government believe that as the main subject, they should concentrate on economic enhancement. Indeed, they reckon by progressing the economic situation of a country many other problem will be solved as easy as possible. Take as an illustration, if economic system of a country was improved, the employment-related issues would be tackled with. In addition with increasing the job vacation, training system of country need to be improved, indeed own manufacturers would like to spend on education for educating the appropriate workforces. Apart from all has been said, with promoting the economic situation, government earn more tax and could invest on other basic necessities of society.
On the other hand, I think without a comprehensive policy and just by investing on economic government will not be able to solve the all problems. In other words even if some economic-related matter progressed, we would not be in line with sustainable development. For example, if government just focus on economic situation, environment will be destroyed, why there would not be any sufficient solution to overcome these shortages. In addition for achieving a developed country integrity management should be applied, indeed government should care about all aspects of society such as environment, politic, economic, education and so on.
In conclusion, I could infer, all aspects of a society should be progressed coincidentally and governments need to take this matter as their main purpose instead of sole economic progress, in other words integrity management should be utilized by government as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: addition,
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Suggestion: necessities
...earn more tax and could invest on other basic necessities of society. On the other hand, I thin...
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Suggestion: addition,
...olution to overcome these shortages. In addition for achieving a developed country integ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould be utilized by government as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, incidentally, so, well, while, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47781569966 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23089418154 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535836177474 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2495771858 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.909090909 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2727272727 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208364492584 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905681930845 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562279006477 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151430374841 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329053065974 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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