Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many local councils urge that economic progress is their crucial goal, but some folks believe that other types of progress are equally vital for a nation. By discussing both the views, i will give my opinion in the end.
At the outset, economic progress is for the betterment of the nation; however, enough facilities are not provided to citizens owing to which they might disagree. Governments are focusing on economic purpose like investing money in industrial era, giving importance to import and export, and many. To cite an example, Hitler, one of the greatest ruler during the time of second world war, was just thinking about economic growth of country due to which he was able to acquire large kingdoms and invested all money in buying exorbitant equipments for war, but did not help any citizen of his country by the reason of which he was consider very brutal. also, they are spending in space research in order to get unique identity, and for name and fame. For instance, Mission mangal, first country to achieve that is India, on an account of which country get popularity. because of this research become developing country and getting support from neighbouring countries, consequently for the growth of nation and to become developed nation executives are spending on economic progress.
On the other hand, some people do not support this idea because during economic progress facilities are not provided like investing money in health sector or education sector. For the fulfilment of their bread and butter they think that they should not only focus on economic growth but also in other sectors which will help citizen to complete their dreams. it become consequential for a person to live peacefully for that for that they should spend on other progress.
In conclusion, rather than other type of progress authorities should spend on economic growth because it has more positive consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0917721519 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56411730709 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54746835443 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.352485544 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.083333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310240394858 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119766490892 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769682515996 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210935214738 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931774096991 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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