Many museums and historical sights are mainly visited by tourists not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
Museums and historical sights are pictures of the history for a nation. These places are mainly visited by tourists only, not by local inhabitants due to lack of interest and poor maintenance of these places, therefore, authorities should add some new things to create the interest of local people to visit it and it should well-maintain by authorities.
There are number of factors involve that museums and historical sights fail to attract the attention of locals.One of them is that local inhabitants do not have interest in visiting these places, because, they are already familiar with their historical background. For instance, there is a museum related to sikhism in my own city, hardly visited by locals, but, numerous visitors from overseas there to visit it. Another reason stems from historical attraction themselves, because of, low budget, as a result, authorities unable to maintain it properly. Moreover, costly tickets are also a big cause that these places are unable to attract local residents, since, there is nothing new which is worth-seeing for locals, so, they are unwilling to spend their money to see same thing again and again .
However, a range of available options which can be helpful to attract local people to visit these places, but, the most evident would be that free entry for locals, since, if there will be no any entry fee, local people can qualify themselves to visit these places. furthermore, authorities can make these places interesting by adding some new things such as sound and lightning programs, which, can be helpful to attract more locals. Meanwhile these places should well-maintained by authorities as these places should properly clean, there should not spread litter by visitors.
To conclude, museums and historical sights are a picture of our great history and it is also a earning source from overseas tourists, but, it is the responsibility of government they should allocate money to maintain it properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76196363421 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506289308176 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9735022229 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385769637113 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150494493814 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083999976338 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231610547054 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102484818039 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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