many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.do you think that this is a worth-whilething to do or do you feel children have enough education at school.
In the modern era, due to the cut-throat-compitition parents forced their children to join tution classes after their school.This approach has its own strengths and weaknesses.For instance,joining extra classes along with school study can be helpful to improve their grades,however, sometimes tution classes proved to be an extra burden on students.
organizing extra classes for school students can prove beneficial for a number of reasons.one of them is that tution classes can prove boon for the students who are unable to learn at fast pace, since, every student has their own pace of learning in the class,therefore, slow learner students can learn things by doing their work so many times during their tution classes.Meanwhile,another positive feature is that,nowadays, people are money-minded so they are solely running their business through the school, as a result, they teach numerous students at the same time in a class, that is why,some students are unable to learn properly due to plenty of students in the class,consequently,they can join extra classes to learn things in a proper way.
Although, this pattern has number of benefits, but, on closer inspection, we can find some drawbacks.A
fundamental weakness of this method is that lack of persuing hobbies.During their extra classes school students are left with no-time to persue their hobbies,as they have no time to play because of their busy schedule of studies.Moreover, another weak point of this approach is that some parents forced to their children to join tution classes even they are doing-well in their classes,which results in the form of stress and students become unable to perform well in their studies due to the extra pressure.
in conclusion, the pros of this system far outweigh the cons.Students should, in my opinion join extra classes along with school study so they can persue their hobbies as well because is mandatory for their proper devlopment.
- many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends.do you think that this is a worth-whilething to do or do you feel children have enough education at school. 50
- Many museums and historical sights are mainly visited by tourists not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31067961165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3728235454 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501618122977 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.468069832 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.25 106.682146367 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.25 20.7667163134 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262280107098 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170584354502 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291547827215 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142343558961 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661439836773 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.1 11.3001002004 284% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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