Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.Why is this the case, and what can be done to encourage more local people to visit these places?
It is true that most people visiting museums and historical sites are tourists, but not local citizens.This problem happens because of some reasons, and the governments should come up with some solutions to it.
To begin with, the residents are not interested in visiting these places, which is caused by several factors. First, many people think they already know about their own country’s c
ulture, history and tradition. This leads to a waste of time to gain the same knowledge. By contrast, tourists are often attracted by collections of ancient objects or artworks in museums during their trip to a new place. Furthermore, there are more interesting activities to do than a trip to these destinations. Due to providing a range of leisure facilities and activities, parks and entertainment centres make people feel more excited than a tour during historical sites.
There are somes actions which need to be taken to solve this problem. Firstly, the states should host regular events and demonstrations such as concerts, festivals, which is attractive to local people. Secondly, it is necessary for the governments to use social media channels to drive visitors to these historic places. This can be done by creating a fan page on Facebook, which allows residents to share their experiences or their feelings about these places. As a result, it would encourage many people who have never been to a museum to come.
In conclusion, there are several causes of a lack of local individuals visiting museums, and this issue could be addressed by some effective solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...es are tourists, but not local citizens.This problem happens because of some reasons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1673151751 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86272395119 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7049771074 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355352416306 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986596193278 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486546480172 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171853231148 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303966047363 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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