A museum is a building in which artifacts and other objects of artistic or scientific interest are carefully preserved and presented to the public for education and entertainment. Some may argue whether or not a museum should sell an entry ticket to its visitor. In my opinion, I strongly believe that having admission charges can bring more benefits than drawbacks.
Although the museum with a free ticket policy may encourage more visitors from any social class to access these exhibits, it is noticeable that a museum is poorly run due to insufficient funds which would reduce the number of visitors or even close down the building. By charging an admission fee, the museum will gain various benefits. First, the museum will have money to operate effectively. It is far more sustainable to keep the standards of exhibits high thanks to the money they receive from ticket sales. Not only does it ensure that the museum will be well-managed by having sufficient staff to offer services, but it also covers the maintenance and restoration matter. From people’s perspective, paying an entrance fee will encourage visitors to have a responsibility not to violate the environment when they are experiencing art and knowledge.
Since museums are a fundamental part of a country’s cultural heritage, the entrance fee should be set at an affordable amount. Therefore it encourages local citizens to experience and study as well as promote tourism.
In conclusion, although I recognize that the museums' ticket selling can cause drawbacks, I believe that museums should have a stable fund to be operated and developed most effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ation and entertainment. Some may argue whether or not a museum should sell an entry ticket to...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... should be set at an affordable amount. Therefore it encourages local citizens to experie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9537659228 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6147379078 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.583333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21073492893 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784947741866 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644002276254 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121413415362 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620291031583 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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