Nowadays, some museums charge visitors while others do not. This essay will discuss if entry fees are prons or cons and provide examples.
Museums all kind of focus, are since their development the arch of knowledge, education and discovery. All of them contains heritage of our society which could be destroyed if not protected. From one hand as museum is place, where part of human history is stored, each individual should be allowed to explore and experience it. Human beings benefits from history knowledge to learn from it and avoid to repeat same mistakes than before. Although the fact, that exposed artefacts have been someones belongings as after as before, they are pat of human history.
On the other hand, scientist, museums and government invest incredible amount of resources to find world heritage, renovate, protect and displayed. Each step of this process is very expensive and supporting it just from government budget might cause lost of many of them. Paying entry fee from visitors is not able to cover all expenses, however, can reduce total cost of the exposition and cover payroll for museum employees. In fact, museums should be entry fee free during public holidays or for special events, to attract people, who will not be visiting it while entry fee must be paid. Each museum contains endless source of informations which visitors can not get over one visit.
To sum up, I disagree with fact, that museums should be entry free. Our society has to participate and appreciate effort of people who conservate human heritage for current and future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid repeating'.
Suggestion: avoid repeating
... history knowledge to learn from it and avoid to repeat same mistakes than before. Although the...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...m employees. In fact, museums should be entry fee free during public holidays or for ...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...agree with fact, that museums should be entry free. Our society has to participate an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, as to, in fact, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08015267176 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49632618588 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4403387062 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197745719305 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689422712683 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747559301709 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1316632103 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546018662757 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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