In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in small family units, instead of a large, extended family. It is a positive or negative trend.
family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-height: 24px;">family: "Calibri Light";">it is argued that in many countries, younger generations in big cities prefer to live in nuclear families or live alone instead of living in extended families. While I have to admit that this perspective is accurate to somewhat extent. I still hold a notion that this trend has positive effects and some drawbacks.
family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-height: 24px;">family: "Calibri Light";">On the one hand, many people have chosen to live alone or living in a nuclear family with fewer two generations. In particular, young people do not wish to live the traditional lifestyles of their parents or grandparents. Therefore living alone allows them the freedom to do as they without constantly having to face constant judgment or criticism. Moreover, most of the people in huge cities have a hectic schedule, they can be incapable to take care of their parents and grandparents and the environment is more and more polluted so older people should stay in the countrysides or rural where have fresh air and peaceful for better health.
family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-height: 24px;">family: "Calibri Light";">On the other hand, this trend brings numerous drawbacks. As a matter of fact, parents and grandparents get older, they may deal with several physical and mental health problems, and by living alone, they may lack the care and attention they need from their children. Secondly, living in an extended family will increase the interaction and influence between members of the family. For instance, parents and grandparents can help educate and take care of their children. Finally, living together can lead to tightening the bond between generations.
family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-height: 24px;">family: "Calibri Light";">To recapitulate, I am strongly convinced that despite the developmet of living alone or in a nuclear family trend, people should live in an extended family due to a number of benefits that it brings.family: "Calibri Light";">
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...instead of living in extended families. While I have to admit that this perspective i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...s positive effects and some drawbacks. family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-hei...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tyles of their parents or grandparents. Therefore living alone allows them the freedom to...
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Suggestion: Family
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Family
...ghtening the bond between generations. family: Calibri; text-align: justify; line-hei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in particular, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96507936508 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.16861058207 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520634920635 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.2773088182 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182522298714 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734201600964 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573044504549 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140873832838 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451855451196 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.