Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations.
Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
We can see the lifestyle of many athletes, politicians, models including their private lives through the media world. Everyone would definitely want their private spaces when they are with their friends, families and their loved ones. Considering media as a key aspect for their popularity, it is still not appropriate to indulge in their personal life to give out private information.
Firstly, people buy newspapers and magazines to find interesting stories and sometimes gossips. These famous people are certainly the role models for many people around the world also people start following their activities including their personal life. It is the public that forces the newspaper and magazine publishers to cover information on the personal life of famous people.
Secondly, Newspapers and magazines provide these kind of information in order to attract the public. It became a regular aspect of today’s media to show much interest in providing stories mainly on the off screen life of famous stars. In doing so they help their business grow rather than giving information that does not grab the attention of the audience.
However looking from theses famous people’s point of view, they too are ordinary people just like the others. They do have families and their leisure time. They seem to get annoyed or sometimes they involve in physical actions against media when constantly disturbed. When such situation occurs, newspapers and magazines turn that into business by publishing the incident.
In my point of view, though it is the magazines and newspapers helped them become famous people they should give them their private space. People should avoid showing interest in someone else’s personal life. It is also not appreciable to write about their personal life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...ondly, Newspapers and magazines provide these kind of information in order to attract the ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271028037383 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.140186915888 0.155533422707 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934579439252 0.0946595960268 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0623052959502 0.0501214627716 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0872274143302 0.0437548338989 199% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0965732087227 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0342679127726 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62181878537 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0249221183801 0.0326793684256 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00623052959502 0.00163938923432 380% => OK
Determiners: 0.0591900311526 0.0861772015684 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01246105919 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155763239875 0.011925033212 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1813.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3838028169 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.415492957746 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295774647887 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211267605634 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147887323944 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62181878537 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 59.0031803158 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7058823529 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1760982856 49.517814964 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.814263465372 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 46.2833471417 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.38709677419 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443569699833 0.332605444948 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104926475197 0.102741220458 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0657105675293 0.0668466124924 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551581537764 0.534860350844 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102356846441 0.148594505496 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152672316039 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756644367634 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.262306164793 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0363272656279 0.0638462369009 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273974090512 0.228012699653 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250594310242 0.058150111329 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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