Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nations’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Over the last few decades, there are a lot of debate about historical buildings around the world.Certain people said that these buildings should be diminished, however, the law that has been implemented in every country protect these buildings from being replaced by the modern buildings. This essay will be discussed about the significant facts on why historical buildings should be protected.
First of all, the old buildings will give the deepest effect in making the folk remember about histories. As George Santayana said, the people that forget the history will tend to repeat itself. This quote means that if people nowadays did not remember on how hard their old fighters fight for the freedom of their country, maybe in the future the country can be fall to the hands of colonizer again. As an example, the house of Mahatma Ghandi, at Gujarat has been protected and upgraded beautifully so that, every time people come and visit that place, they will always keep in their mind about the histories that have been happening in India and will try to protect their country from any element of colonization.
Next, these old building play an important role as a source of the income of the country. Every historical buildings have their own specialty and uniqueness, so that's why it should be protected and upgraded in making it as a place for tourism. Research proves that a part of tourist visit another country because they want to see the ancient structure. The government should take this chance by allowing their folk to open up stalls around the old building by selling foods or handcrafts.
To sum up, I really believe that we should protect the old buildings as it can make the folk remember about the historical events that have been happening in the previous decades. On the other hand, the tourist that visit these historical buildings can contribute in the countries’ income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, so, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.73454545455 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.27860067581 2.80592935109 224% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.479072383 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.363636364 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132212514429 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810213810157 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347157545625 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11275428606 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241055105387 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.05 12.4159519038 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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