Many parents believe when their children read books for entertainment they are wasting their time and they should read serious and education books .what is your opinion.

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it is debatable issue whether entertainment reading book...
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...ooks are effective or not.it is believed by some parents reading funny books i...
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... are effective or not.it is believed by some parents reading funny books is wa...
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... or not.it is believed by some parents reading funny books is waste of time ra...
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...t is believed by some parents reading funny books is waste of time rather than...
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...aste of time rather than serious books.i ,however ,disagree with this statement s...
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...ime rather than serious books.i ,however ,disagree with this statement since read...
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...tatement since reading for entertainment purpose is not waste of time. this essay...
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...tainment purpose is not waste of time. this essay will intends some feasible in d...
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...agraphs. Although, some individuals consider that read comic books is not us...
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...d give preference to educational books. since in these days number of subjects has a...
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...nce to educational books. since in these days number of subjects has added in sch...
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... are more essential for better future. serious and educative books build career.but I...
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...re essential for better future. serious and educative books build career.but I b...
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...ucative books build career.but I believe that read comic are essential to getting...
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...us school study.so reading entertainment books are better way of relaxation. As ...
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...tudy.so reading entertainment books are better way of relaxation. As a result,th...
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...e better way of relaxation. As a result,the mind of the child will free from burden...
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...urden and they can more focus on study. In addition to this, reading entertainm...
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...an more focus on study. In addition to this, reading entertainment books is...
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...addition to this, reading entertainment books is source of knowledge because nu...
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...nt books is source of knowledge because number of articles are published in bo...
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...cause number of articles are published in books with some graphics and interest...
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...end leisure time but also way of getting information. For instance, morale storie...
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...hen youngones try to imagine whole story in mind which helps to enhance the imag...
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... I think it is not waste of time ofchild,it can help to youngones in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28624535316 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75741223461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579925650558 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5340569214 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352641787608 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117245833218 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11372386702 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217804003401 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802419907505 0.056905535591 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.