The families and roles are changing. What are the reasons and it is positive or negative development.
With passage of time living styles and way of working are changing. In these days the family structured has altered as well as roles of family members are also distinguish than earlier time. Number of reasons are contribute in this phenomenon and it has both the positive and negative impacts.
On the one hand, there are many causes which are responsible for this trend. Firstly, people are now highly qualified and women have great role to play in society, equal education services are provided to women in Contemporary era so both genders are working. To elaborate it, they work in big cities or in overseas nations which leads to single parent family. Secondly, extended families are divided in nuclear families in order to reduce responsibility. Secondly, students move to foreign nations in order to take quality education. Thus they are independent and take all decisions themselves instead follow their parents. To be more specific, in earlier time parents make all decisions such as their higher study, and professional were selected by parents it is major cause of altering role of family. Finally, people have hectic schedule as due to rising inflation people pursuit for earning huge money they burning mid night oil. So they tend towards small family structured and they are under the influence of Western culture and adopt their lifestyles.
On the other hand, I believe that the trend have both positive and negative impacts. First of all, people live in nuclear families and both man and women contribute in financial resources which leads to reduction in burden and uplift the living standard. Besides this, when parents allow children to take all significant decisions on their own then children can develop their decision making skills. What is more, altering family structure helps in bringing equality in community as both male and female get all opportunities and role of women not restricted only to nurture the children. However, it pose threat to social bonding of people as people hardly interact with people in society which weakening the social relationships as parents are busy in their works so they do not spend time with their offsprings which some times make cause of indulging children in bad company and children remain deprive from moral values. Last but not least, dividing family means division of property which gives less returns and more expenses.
To conclude, although Changing family structure and roles have some positives yet I think that plenty of negative effects are attached with this trend and there are number of reasons why people about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, i think, such as, as well as, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2178.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12470588235 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50601380489 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555294117647 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9690598078 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.631578947 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3684210526 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.10526315789 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205568189828 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673535874686 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741249664792 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172482921734 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089243976401 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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