Family is the most significant thing throughout anyone's life with the close emotional bond with each other although,some family promote the culture that their children should get departed from home for their self benefits whereas others disagree.However, in my personal perspective a adult must leave a house for his own sake.
To begin with,every family want the prosperity of their children.Thus, parents consider when their grown up children exit from home they can be independent to make their decision as well as they can see the real world without the shadow of their family members.Similarly, a recent survey also prove that adult who get departed from home are 50% more creative as well as successful then who stay with the parents.
On the other hand, people who consider children should not leave their parental is because the old -grown person's needs some to take care of them because they are mostly unable to prepare food and wash their clothes similarly they need the strong emotional support in old age. In addition, many people in developing country are bound by tradition practice because according to their culture leaving parents in old age is like a crime and also believed as the most evil deeds. Thus if any person want to exit from home he is bounded by tradition.
In conclusion, this essay discussed why parents motivate their babies to vacate home because family wants them to be independent in their own and get out of their shadow. However, on the other hand, some parents restrict their adults to leave the house cause they need strong support as well as children are traditional bounded. Although, in my perspective children must take a depart from home and stand on their own.
- In some countries, old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- In some countries old people are highly valued while in some cultures young people are highly valued Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they become older while others think that they should stay at home with the family discuss both views and give your own opinion 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, similarly, so, then, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94791666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63863074395 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.946425697 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.125 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.625 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209813415016 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104100321047 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275313446911 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143515999234 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120995393056 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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