Many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant experience.
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The educated individuals collectively develop a better society and today, each and every nation pay particular attention on literacy. And many parents hire private tutor for makeup classes in evening and on weekend. According to my perspective its not absolutely necessary to arrange special help classes because education is not about getting good grades and memorising things. In this essay, we are going to discuss some of reasons about specific time allocation for studies.
Firstly, a lot more people develop competition between children about good marks and want they get distinction in school. And this is not an excellent approach od study, which basic purpose to organise ideas and have clear concept but such coaching center only concentrate on memorising rather than on developing perspects. In this way students will get position although at higher level creats problem.
Secondly, pupils too much dependent on external sources to solve problem and less likely use their own thinking. This dependency leads to less confident on oneself and mostly instead of self awareness or innovative thoughts try to copy others. For example, in india number of students worked hard to secure points in result and for that purpose they studied extra and alot. And this thing can be seen in research work, that lack the novality and orginality of thinking as compared to westren University pupils.
Another think is reducing time for extra curricular activities in their life. The time which should spend on playing games or in physical activities consume by this kind of education. In this way instead of becoming healthy generation, more becoming book warms. This effect can be observed in recent studies new generation is more inclined toward sluggish lifestyle and more depressed and stressed than their parental age group.
In conclusion, A healthy and educated nation would only form if we will utilise best stratigies to grought up them. In order to creat a successful person people want their children to join extra periods in holidays and in evening. But its not a good approach because effecting them mentally and physically as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...on weekend. According to my perspective its not absolutely necessary to arrange spe...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...nd. According to my perspective its not absolutely necessary to arrange special help classes because...
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Line 1, column 419, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the reasons') or simply say ''some reasons''.
Suggestion: some of the reasons; some reasons
... In this essay, we are going to discuss some of reasons about specific time allocation for stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61433528881 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64347826087 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.381308069 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181367139869 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509288023241 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379250435426 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884061056615 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265901541514 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.