Many parents today organize extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
- In many schools, class="there">there are class="too">too many class="children">children in one class. It is nearly impossible for the teacher to pay attention to all of them. In my opinion, such class="children">children will need to attend extra classes after school. For example, in mumbai almost all students attend coaching classes after school. Private coaching institutes are mushrooming class="there">there. they charge a hefty fee. still, even poor parents send their class="children">children to these coaching institutes because they are worried that their class="children">children might get poor grades if they didn’t receive extra coaching. schools in mumbai are overcrowded and that limits the amount of attention each student can receive from school. students in many parts of the world face this problem. In such situations extra coaching often becomes a necessity.
- Unfortunately, class="there">there is another side to this. when class="children">children spend much of their time in schools and coaching classes, they get hardly any time for themselves. class="children">children who don’t play often develop health problems like obesity and diabetes. many of them also suffer from anxiety and depression because they are under constant pressure to obtain better grades.
- A lot of parents and schools simply don’t understand the importance of play. many of them do not even allow their class="children">children to pursue extracurricular activities when they are in high school. While some students certainly need to focus more on academics to get better grades, others may wilt under class="too">too much academic pressure.
- To conclude, parents should allow class="children">children to decide whether they need extra coaching or not. students enrolled in good schools probably don’t need extra coaching. But if parents or the students are concerned that they might need extra attention, class="there">there is no harm in attending coaching classes. they should still ensure that they set aside at least an hour a day for play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, at least, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.53666666667 5.12529762239 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.76183221571 2.80592935109 241% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0132899626 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.380952381 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183579696822 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798228277518 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565491609553 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140617828315 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177836615883 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.06 12.4159519038 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.