It is inevitably true that due to the modern development of various countries that particularly affects in different natural resources for instance forest, animals, rivers and so on. I believe that such type of natural resources really important for surviving the human life easily. I would like to explain why such resources are important.
Firstofall , I would like to talking about forest natural resources . Forest are very essential for any lives human and animals. Firstly, it really helps to maintain the ecology system of the world. Furthermore, forest play the paramount role to decrease...
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I believe that such type of natural resources really important
I believe that such type of natural resources are really important
I would like to talking about forest natural resources
I would like to talk about forest natural resources
Forest are very essential for any lives human and animals.
Forest are very essential for any lives of human and animals.
a wild animal tigers are probably lost from the world
a wild animal tiger is probably lost from the world
so that it necessary to preserve tigers in suitable place
so that it is necessary to preserve tigers in suitable places
forests have important in any sector of human life.
forests are important in any sector of human life.
People being employed while establish new company and new development.
People are being employed while establishing new company and new development.
for various beneficial to the real world.
for various benefits to the real world.
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