Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clear water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, with the rapid growth of population and industrialisation, our natural resources are getting overexploited, and among all, forests are the most threatened. Every year hundreds and thousands of acres of forest are being cut down to satisfy human needs, and this has resulted in various ecological problems. So it is crucial to save these forests from disappearing.
First of all, forests provide shelter and food for all the animals and people who live in it, but today with the increasing rate of deforestation, they had to migrate to other places in search of food. As these forest regions are being cut down, and are now turned into farmlands, these animals have no places to go, so it is very common now that we can spot a bear or a herd of elephants in the backyards of the houses which are close to the forest. Even there are instances where tigers hunt down people’s livestock, and even attack them. Since the forests are getting depleted, the balance of the ecosystem is disturbed, and in the worst case scenerio some species may even get extinct.
Secondly, logging of wood has resulted in climatic changes in many places. As in the case of the Amazon rainforest, the cutting down of these tropical rainforests have changed the rainfall patterns over these regions. Also, these forests are known for many valuable medicinal plants which were used by tribal people to cure many diseases. Now all these herbal plants are endangered because of human interventions. So now the government in very countries has made strict laws in order to protect their forest resources, and to pass it down to the future generations.
So to conclude, it is our responsibility to save our forest resources from being depleted and we should practice activities like afforestation to bring back the forest regions that were once lost.
- Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests animals or clear water Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ow 78
- In some countries there are women taking positions in male dominated occupations such as police officers and soldiers Some people believe that women are not suited to such work To what extend do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93851132686 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77236556561 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569579288026 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9349816772 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132310289846 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484858388371 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409424760714 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933053382157 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336705609979 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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