In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves.
Recently, the non-stop broadcasting of sport has become a debatable issue in many parts of the world. It is a common belief that various sporting channels, which are projected on televisions, can contribute to arousing the interest of watching these programs from day and night instead of participating in it. Nevertheless, I maintain that watching sports can lead to expressing a desire to do physical exercise.
To begin with, many students always justify that they are often under pressure from academically achievements at schools as well as extra classes, and parents are too conscious of being injured and dirty can be entailed from outdoor games. To put in other words, the indolent lifestyles of adolescents and the concern of serious accidents are the principal reasons for the lack of doing sports. Indeed, watching a favorite sports program on television is more appropriated for a short break than playing sports by ourselves because we will be time-consuming to build teams, make rules and get scores. Also, only when parents can set aside time for teenagers, they can go out and play some games; therefore, it is infrequent for the young to gain considerable benefits from frequent exercise. According to the Oxford survey, there is 25% of citizens watching sports channels higher than those who take part in a diverse mixture of outdoor hobbies.
On top of that, watching some models being good at many fields of sports, people have more motivation to keep in shape like their stars. In other words, for example, after seeing some celebrators in a well-built, an overweight adolescent can recognize his or her body’s situation. This can result in doing exercise regularly and effectively than at any time in the past. According to the Active Guys club, a minority of people adjusting their daily basis schedules to spend more time on sports belongs to admirers of watching sports channels.
To sum up, it is clear to see that while in some cases, people become addicted to watching television almost a day, sports programs can present a powerful impact on their healthy lifestyles. Besides, I suggest that people should have well-balanced lives, which have harmony between studying or working and sporting, to avoid some striking downfall for one’s body shape and vigorous life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77381122095 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609042553191 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4896774053 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.642857143 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25580220556 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865276650457 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570998707179 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153327092458 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290914977702 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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