Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, a large proportion of residents choose to stay at home rather than going outside due to their scare of offences that my occur in public. Personally, steps should be carried out within governments's financial budgets in order to improve the guarantee of citizens' safety.
It should be noted that tons of action have been done which have reduced possibilities of crime to some extent. A classic example is the illustration of public surveillance system, form that the police can supervise people's behaviours in case that they will commit a crime in public. However, the resistance of steping out indicates that there are still deficiencies in existing surveillance systems. For instance, supervision equipment should have been covered a wider range, for the reason that a large amount of public offences are not exposed to such supervised machines, which creates opportunities for criminals to commit a crime.
But what should not be neglected is that the occurrence of crime would not be eliminated despite however huge improvements ahve been made in public surveillance system. Besides, the reasons of commiting crimes in public lie in existing and potential criminals' attitudes towards sins. It turns out to be impossible to alter their moral rules regardless of the actions of prevention. Additionally, the governments are responsible for allocating financial funds properly. Should too much funds spent on preventing sins in public, there would be financial defict occuring in other areas, which will result in distressing outcomes.
To sum up, it is encouraged to do the deed to prevent public offences from being occurred within financial ability of governments. Only by that can everyone live safe and smooth life.
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Young people who commit serious crimes such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services - to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and the comparis 11
- Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ng financial funds properly. Should too much funds spent on preventing sins in publi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34671532847 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92351257597 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8649082698 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216239302718 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738530580776 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523891396437 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121375532466 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433543424539 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.