Many people are afraid of leaving house because of crime. Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be done. What is your view?
It is true that home in modern society has become a place of safety that protects people against various kinds of crimes such as street robbery and car theft. While some people believe that there is nothing the community could improve to tackle this issue, I would agree with those who are of the opinion that it is the obligation of the government to uphold order and stability to mitigate the occurrence of crimes.
In terms of regulations, the full weight of the law should be imposed for all serious offences in order to deter crimes. For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment and lowering the minimum crime age on punishment could act as effective ways to preclude crimes, especially to prevent young criminals from escaping punishment. The living environment for residents would, therefore, be improved thanks to those policies that deter potential crimes.
In terms of education, boosting the popularity of primary and secondary levels of studying programs is considered as an urgent task. As a sad truth, people who live in slums with minimum education would more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and a comparatively higher social status. Hence, by encouraging more people to continue their education path to enhance their awareness of social ethics and morality that is highlighted in several subjects at schools, the living condition and public security would be strengthened. Additionally, in the long term, this improvement would be the foundation of a civilized society where the possibility of crime occurrence is diminished to a certain extent.
In conclusion, I believe that the crime rate will be reduced if government focuses on developing education and reinforcing laws, thereby people’s standard of living will become better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33450704225 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86720057185 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1060971488 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.5 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16698580217 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647497796183 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286899338863 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988031898685 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163036171304 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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