many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?

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many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?

Submitted by takeru on Fri, 01/20/2017 - 22:45

Dolphin is one of many kinds of animals in this beautiful world, it is very smart, intelligent and useful but in fact, dolphins are being captured to perform in a circus. How gross it is!! But there are some people that are against doing such a gross thing like that and I totally agree with these people :)))). This paragraph will answer why I agree with it. First of all, the dolphin is the smartest, the most intelligent animal in the world. It can understand some parts of what we said such as hello or goodbye, maybe….. The dolphin takes the first place in the world record of animals. What an animal!! Second, dolphins help people a lot. As I could know, there was an accident in an aquarium about four or five years ago, maybe… There was a girl watching the performance of dolphins with her brother and suddenly slipped and dropped into the big tank, two dolphins in that tank swam fast and saved her. How luck was the girl!! Third, dolphins are the kinds of animals to have its beauty not to be joked in a circus.In a circus, they are treated like things to have fun just like something to make people laugh. It is gross!! I have heard that the sound of them or the sound of the whip makes my heart hurt. Maybe they are crying maybe they want to get out of the circus immediately and never want to come back their again. Dolphins do not deserve to be treated like that. In summary, I think the dolphins are good and they ain’t deserve any maltreatment

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 519, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...we said such as hello or goodbye, maybe….. The dolphin takes the first place in th...
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Line 1, column 1018, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... its beauty not to be joked in a circus.In a circus, they are treated like things ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, i think, in fact, in summary, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38235294118 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23309273487 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569852941176 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.168509669 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6923076923 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228948937621 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790264698666 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573360511759 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228948937621 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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