Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
I agree with the statement which against training dolphins. Dolphins are wild animals and when we put them in the limited space, they will lose their natural habits. They change their behavior. It’s not equal for dolphins. Let’s us consider that if we are pent, we will still be happy? No, it’s so uncomfortable. Dolphins like us, have emotions even personalities. They have difficulty in showing their emotion. They always smile even when they are sad something else. They, of course, love the freedom more than contacting with people especially in the way that they don’t like. To train dolphins in the circus, people have to hit them a lot which makes them hurt. And it’s so violent. Don’t exchange our interests with their injuries of both heath and spiritual life. You know, we will feel more wonderful and truer to see them at beaches, in oceans, nature than watching them performing like monkeys, dogs in the circus by doing such unnatural actions. They deserve more than that. Stop keeping them caged as prisons and let them free naturally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 485, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... even when they are sad something else. They, of course, love the freedom more than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 179.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02793296089 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.515716337 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7936403591 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.25 106.682146367 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1875 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.125 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106281498561 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330875335631 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541957694621 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106281498561 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.71 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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