Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

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Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?

Dolphins have always been regarded as one of the most intelligent creatures in the sea. Their ability to communicate, learn, and socialize has captivated people. The dolphins show are fantastic. They perform lots of tricks such as passing balls, waving their tails and else. This helps people make a lot of money. But, for the dolphins, this is an abuse!!!
First, dolphins may get hurt or injured during the training or performance. If they do, it will take a long time for them to recover. Serious injuries might be with them forever.
Secondly, the pool is too small for the dolphins, whose physiology are built for the wide open seas. So they might lose natural abilities of a sea creature…Think of having to stay cooped up in a tiny room day in and day out!
Besides, dolphins perform not because they enjoy, they are starved. These lovely creatures were starved until the show during which they were fed as a reward for their performance. Unbelievable!!! Dolphins are not only an animal species but also are our FRIENDS <3 And they aren’t robots which help people make money. If you want to entertain, there’re lots of ways to amuse ourselves other than seeing these beautiful friends performing in captivity, out of fear and hunger!!!

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... animal species but also are our FRIENDS ^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91079812207 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72148249505 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0152835629 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4615384615 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155061626903 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499217871207 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394293346428 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861347133607 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556263357098 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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