Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injures these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Dolphin is known as one of the most intelligent animals; hence, they are trained for entertainment in the circus. This leads to many objections because people aware that these animals can be injured. I totally agree with this idea.
As can be seen, dolphin is a common way to amuse people, especially children in the circus. It means that they have been interned since they were small or was born even to train instead of living in oceans freely. These animals have to stand savage training program for a long time. This is the main reason cause the decrease in fertility, health and age of dolphins. Besides, in narrow pools, the water environment is polluted where bad bacteria and virus can maintain makes dolphins infect intestinal and venereal diseases.
Secondly, the dolphin is in danger of extinction. According to a research of Dolphins-world, the most considerable threat to dolphin’s death come from human’ demands. It also point out that 95% deaths of dolphins during the 10-years recently was caused by human. There is a growing body of evidence that people harm them by many ways such as uncareful captivity, illegal transport and capture…
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...s in danger of extinction. According to a research of Dolphins-world, the most considerabl...
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Message: Did you mean 'points'?
Suggestion: points
... come from human' demands. It also point out that 95% deaths of dolphins during ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0621761658 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75211974027 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683937823834 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5687720349 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4166666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213225233084 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703334195533 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482976980652 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148997430621 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711970455744 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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