Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century?
Regarding the belief of many that the 21st cenury is a good time for positive worldwide revolutions, I totally agree with said idea for the following reasons.
Firstly, the new century is already well-equipped with the legacy of its precessors, featuring modern technology, developed and civil society, and first steps of protecting the planet. Secondly, and unfortunately, such achievements came with some drawbacks in terms of the environment such as pollution and global warming due to overwhelming human activities, namely deforestation, industrialization, overfishing, etc. However, chances are said issues might help raise awareness of saving the environment and natural resources among the new generation.
As for possible changes in the 21st century, I personally have high hopes for new discoveries in the medical field, in hopes of having treatments for previously incurable conditions as well as acheiving other healthcare cuccess. Other changes that I am looking forward to in the new century is the human-to-nature and human-to-human harmony, which can be demonstrated by practical actions to protect nature, avoiding violence in settling international conflicts, and joining hands in solving global issues.
Overall, while facing several obstacles, the 21st century is worth anticipating as the new era of a better world, as long as we, as the new generation, really make every effort for the sake of a brighter future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58904109589 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2997115902 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657534246575 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1591290746 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.857142857 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136627526153 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574181080288 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376489360378 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808604496616 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331232365541 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 50.2224549098 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.09 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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