Many people are working longer and longer hours. What are the reasons and effects?
Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that people devote more their time to work than before. In this essay, the major causes and effects of this phenomenon will be analyzed in depth.
The primary reasons are the competitive working environment in the market in these days. In order to improve products’ quality and reap more revenue and profit, the employers have set many more targets and higher requirements for their staff. Moreover, there is a fact that employers always in a state of replacing incompetent workers or even those who are inadequate effort. As a result, the employees have to devote more their time and energy in order to not only meet their managers’ expectations but also make an attempt to show a good performance so as to keep their bread and butter.
Nonetheless, there are various unfavorable impacts stem from this phenomenon. One of the important negative effects is that their mental health is prone to stress, depression, anxiety disorder. Working constantly under pressure without proper breaks triggers major negative consequences such as heart attack or insomnia. On top of that, time for their families and friends is not sufficient which results in damaging family relationships. Living alone without caring and interaction with their families is also leads to depression or even suicide ideation in several individuals.
In conclusion, People are eventually successful in their job at the cost of damaging relationships with their families and health problems. If people do not have a proper working schedule, they will be suffered plenty of life issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28515625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85830485012 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2311051378 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101663433165 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395171731935 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03974868883 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069536147242 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264390618442 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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