Many people believe in a balance between work and other parts of their life, but few achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this and how can these problems can be overcome ?
In today’s world, more and more people are beginning to achieve balance with their jobs and other areas of their lives. However, there are less people who achieve this goal. From my perspective, these problems depend on their timeline and also their living conditions. This essay will explore the primary reason behind this trend and proposed solutions to mitigate the issue.
There are several reasons why few achieve to balance their work and their life. First, poise between working and other parts such as family, friends or free time have been difficult because they have a short-time at home, while they are trying to control and plan, but the few day-off make them more tired. Second, they do not have management skills to have a timetable, making everything difficult to control. In addition, this problem could overlap with many things on a daily basis. For example, the age group over 20 years old in Vietnam is becoming more busy with their work, family, relationships, tying the knot, balancing these things is something they cannot do. They just can spend their time on special events.
To address the issue, I suppose the government and educating management skills play an important role. First, the government should not only increase the overall working-time rate of employment by about 8 hours but also to mitigate their feeling of fatigue. As a result, they have more opportunities to travel or spend time with their family, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, educating the public, especially young people to understand and develop independent ways to manage their time could become less over-reliant on their companies and also help them balance between work and other parts of their life. Moreover, it would result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. For instance, Nordic nations are not the wealthiest countries, but they always rank high at the top of healthcare and also the suitable hours for workers.
In conclusion, the difficulty of equalization between work and other parts of their lives are largely driven by behavior and their shortage of free time. On the contrary, with efforts from the authorities and netizens, this problem can be reduced through regulations, education and changes in personal behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...special events. To address the issue, I suppose the government and educating ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15466666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55645031679 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7320971597 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.388888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324587783856 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101175777268 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801976438261 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209485691863 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599570811494 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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