Many people believe that children should be educated by nature while others think it wastes their time and they should only study in their school? Which is your opinion ?
Nowadays, creating opportunities for children to learn within nature is a heated controversial issue. Many people argue that this is an extraordinary part of life for children while others think they only should concentrate on studying at their school. Personally, I strongly agree with first opinion.
On the one hand, training kids in mother nature is the way to improve their awareness of safeguarding the environment from damage. In fact, if children are allowed to contact with nature place, they will understand deeply about how essential flora and fauna are, as well as the role they play in preserving the ecological balance. This not only help s children appreciate the great impact of natural world on human life but also subconsciously formed the love and the guard for it. As a result, the society will develop generation but also protecting the environment before human encroachment, this is only possible with such methods.
On the other hand, forcing children to study so much rather than running wild in the woods and fields is counter-productive. According to many researches in several nations, children’s brain are more creative, fantastic and observable when they exposure to the natural space. Moreover, when parents encourage their children to play outdoor and explore the wildlife, the proportions of kids regularly playing indoor will decrease rapidly. Consequently, many diseases in kids such as obesity, deficit disorder, etc will be controlled than ever before.
In conclusion, the nature is appropriately important to educate children, not only which provides ecological intelligence but also developes their health and consciousness of defending natural world from harm.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06696571485 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4918834098 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344162559052 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108980417576 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104855195712 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208532489209 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905572029865 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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