Many people believe that film is a less important art than other forms such as literature and painting.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have paid their attention to art for many years. While many of them consider pictures and works of literature are far more important than film, It cannot be denied that film holds an equal value to other art forms like writings and drawings.
Just like literature, sculptures or paintings, film can be seen as means of conveying and reflecting cultures of different nations or eras. To be more specific, a great number countries has now been employing film in museums and galleries to show their documents about their own traditional customs to audience. For example, in the mausoleum of president Ho Chi Minh, the document footages of his life with a range number subtitles are presented in many areas so that not only the locals but also foreigners can stroll along the aisles and observe the documentaries. It seems that film has the same artistic value as other forms of art.
Another compelling reason is that film has gained the popularity over pictures or other art forms. In more detail, film making has become a multimillion dollar industry that produces many blockbusters each year attracting a huge number of people. To explain, a study conducted by the university of Queensland, Australia shows that more than 40 percent of students who are involved in the study prefer binge-watching films to reading novels. It is clear that we can hardly refute movies’s tremendous attraction to people.
In conclusion, I believe that the significance of film is no less than any other kinds of art forms. Someone could not evaluate movies or fine arts merely based on their preferences nor consider which one is superior than others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...nces nor consider which one is superior than others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01818181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73599574694 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632727272727 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6722423727 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261997614047 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996843570772 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858956100672 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169575028191 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747918755077 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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