In recent decades, pollution is one of the controversial issues in industrial societies.Technology not only persuaded people to live in many sprawling cities around the world but also causes newly manufacturers established near the big cities.
Too many groups of people represented that the consumption of fuel by vehicles is one of the cardinal sources of air pollution and environmental degradation. In contrast,it suggested that factories have the responsibility for damaging the atmosphere.
On the one hand, some researchers implicated that more than half of the population will live in the cosmopolitan area by 2050. Although technologies compose living conditions more comfortable and easier than before, most of the people live in the megacities, are more likely to drive their private cars or to take public transportation such as buses or trains. So the bulk of vehicles produces an unprecedented scale of chemical contamination. Unfortunately, an alarming rate of carbon monoxide emits in the atmosphere.Therefore, most of the people have to suffer intolerable health crisis in these cities.
On the other hand, others advocate, some firms located around the exurbia of urban have a more pernicious effect on the environment. For example, dumping various wasted production by factories is one of the major factors contributing to water pollution and causing devastation in the metropolitan area. Also, the emission of various greenhouse gases from various industries increases the overall temperature of the earth's surface, resulting in global warming.
I personality believe that thriving industries and increasing numbers of cars, pushing the earth toward an over-polluted place for living.
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- Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population's sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits.Discuss both views and 11
- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- in some countries, people who have high incomes pay very high taxes. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this for individuals and for the country? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66058394161 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35992664179 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.985339139 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227741685364 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686898525218 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490194036145 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120633559029 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437789771946 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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