Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes?
I agree with this statement because in our world facing a lot of problems from tourism. that is an effect on the present and the future time. this essay discusses the demerits of tourism and how is the effect on the world.
To begin with, tourism have various problem. Waste disposal is the major problem effect on degrade the soil, environmental problem and animals. visitors come to our country and they visit places and explore our culture . for example, a team of tourists visit our tourist attractions places and they using plastic materials to carry-in after that they throw it. At the same time animals trying to eat and so on .this is a major reason facing our countries.
On the other hand, tourism help to our world economy and infrastructure.the reason is, a huge number of people come to visit the country and explore it then the foreign money come to other countries. for instance, in India every year a large number of foreigner come to this country that is help to the local people and the government. Moreover, western society trend and fashion would like to try or imitate it .the local people dressing code should be avoided and they try to wear western clothing materials.
To sum up, tourism could have negative things could be effecting our environmental diversity and destroy our culture .then that is helpful for people that is improve our financial status and people have very to imitate the western-style dresses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55511565785 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542510121457 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9139556189 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119039481201 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423337238143 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367111821038 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773406181254 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364181052556 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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