Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries.
What are the reasons? What solutions can you suggest to change such negative attitudes?
The question of whether international travel have adverse impacts on countries has been a matter of debate since the beginning of the twenty first century. This essay will discuss some causes of this problem and examine what we can do to make a difference in points of view of others. There are many reasons why this has occurred. However, I believe that the main cause is the irresponsibility of tourists. They tend to neglect the importance of preserving the local cultures of countries they set foot on. This disturbing trend leads to conflicting opinions of local residents in advocating the tourist industry. Moreover, foreigners' migration can bring about serious repercussions for any nation. For instance, travelers from overseas may have potentially detrimental diseases which are highly infectious. Therefore, tourism is considered to have catastrophic effects on both countries and local people. Although many people have grounds for believing international tourism negatively impacts on their countries, there are solutions to change their thoughts. First of all, we have to make a difference in cognition of local people. By this way, their fastidious attitudes will be able to eradicated. Next, in regard to the government, entering upon campaigns is a considerable way for the purpose of connecting their country with others as well as changing citizen's negative opinions. These solutions can be of help to the development of tourism and play an essential role in any nation's economic growth. Despite of a vast number of approving viewpoints from local residents, there are many courses of action to take. By applying those stringently, we can take our country's tourist industry to the next level.
- Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists and instead of locals Why is this happening What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more 56
- Nowadays museums and historical sites are mainly visited by foreign tourists and instead of locals Why is this happening What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more 56
- Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries What are the reasons What solutions can you suggest to change such negative attitudes 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cts on both countries and local people. Although many people have grounds for be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31734317343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99243109591 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0713558335 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287517446356 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781040788592 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828683234464 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287517446356 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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