Many people believe that it is important to protect the environment, but they make no effort to protect it themselves.
Why do you think it is the case?
What actions do you think that individuals can do to protect the environment?
It seems to be an increasingly widespread concerned that every individual should take steps to curb the climate change but no one give top priority to improve their environment. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main cause of this problem and offer some possible solution for it.
There are several reasons why people do not spare an effort to protect the environment. Firstly, citizens have a tendency to believe that Government and large firms should responsibility for preserving the environment. This is because most of Toxics in the atmosphere stem from organizations which discharge pollutants into the environment. Thus, only government has enough condition to enact law to prevent this action. Moreover, due to the industrial development has brought many benefits for people so most of them do not want to change. For example, people prefer to use cars or motorbike, which run on fossil fuels and release major carbon into the atmosphere, to commute than a bicycle and public transports.
In order to make people give top priority to protect their air quality, government must first address its root cause. The first solution is that local authorities should offer programs to raise the public’s low-carbon awareness. They should encourage citizens exploit renewable energies such as wind, hydro and solar power or take public transit, carpool or fuel-efficient vehicles in order to enhance air condition. Furthermore, Companies should invest in energy-saving technologies. Indeed, they can produce such product environment-friendly to substitute thrown-away items or plastic bags. Therefore, people’s lifestyle also changes to adapt to environment-friendly.
In conclusion, this problem is unlikely to be tackled in the short-term. However, it is by no means insurmountable and I am convinced that more people will attend to government policies to protect our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50170648464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2781352324 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7477599823 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197452648356 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603531991526 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810696273408 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100761063207 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530085754264 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.