Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that governments should perform and limit scientific research instead of private entrepreneurs. In my point of view, I partly agree with this opinion because two reasons include the restriction in the research and the cheating in the marketing of some non-state companies.
To start with, governments usually limit creative and realistic research because of sensitive topics that may affect their reputation that some scientific reports about politics will disappear or be less likely to write about. From my experience, most of the research is talk about or mentions good aspects or strengthens the reputation f the governments, showing off the most rewarding information about the country rather than toxic realities such as sexual bullying or war.
On the other hand, non-state companies do not always tell the truth in their scientific reports like some entrepreneurs pay money to delete research that may influence their commercial or force schools to write about the benefit when using their products in skilled ways. Many high reputation universities are paid to ensure that their students do not work on reports that are relevant to some companies' marketing. According to one study, Coca-Cola promises to invest in some schools which erase their reports about drinking and using too much sugar will lead to many diseases such as diabetes, obesity, and so on.
To sum up, both government and private entrepreneurs have their reasons to restrict the content of scientific reports that I have already mentioned above. Because of that I partly agree with the idea that the government should involve scientific research rather than non-state companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'preform'
Suggestion: preform
...ple believe that the governments should preforms and limits the scientific research inst...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...g and using too much sugar will lead to many disease such as diabetes, obesities and so on. ...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'mentioned'.
Suggestion: mentioned
... scientific reports that I have already mention above. Because of that I partly agree w...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orts that I have already mention above. Because of that I partly agree with the idea of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, such as, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31835205993 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75381519994 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8422201911 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.777777778 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217274662746 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105787462193 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810948935335 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142875170945 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543577632915 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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